BATH Fighter Danced Orange Clumsily
The other night I was having my usual nighttime bath. The bath was orange. “Hmmm, I thought to myself, that’s weird, why is my bath orange?” Because the Juice fell In the bath. I stumbled out of the tub and clumsily fell onto the bath mat! I hit my head on the floor. Suddenly I saw Sparkling stars that danced around the room. And the StarsFollowed me everywhere. I must have hit my head really hard because i looked in the bathtub and saw siamese fighter fish swimming all over the place. Oh my goodness!
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Aimee Wolfram
10/19/2018 10:14:23 am
Hi Luke,
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Mrs.G 100 wc
10/19/2018 10:20:27 am
Hi Luc,
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Ms LaRose
10/21/2018 10:54:21 am
I loved reading your story Luc! Your introduction about the orange coloured bath was a great hook-it made me want to keep reading and find out what happened next! Great job, can't wait to read your next piece of writing :)
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Mrs. Wilson
10/22/2018 08:19:42 am
Great job Luc!! You have a gift of storytelling; I cannot wait to hear what happens next : ). The T-Rex is one of my favourite dinosaurs too. I really like how you talk about what your favourite number and food are as well. Keep it up!
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MOM
10/24/2018 03:13:01 pm
Great job Luke❤️
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