I WONDER WHAT WAS BEHIND THE DOOR....
One day I was playing soccer In the field with my Friends. Someone kicked the soccer ball over to the trees. I ran over to get the soccer ball when I saw a red door. I knocked on the door and no one answered. I called my friends to come take a look. My friends ran over to see the red door. Together we all opened the door. When the door opened we saw a big soccer stadium with people cheering us on. We all went in and started playing. We had so much fun and we even won the golden cup. The End.
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Mrs. C
11/9/2018 07:52:59 am
Luke,
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Miss Wolfram
11/9/2018 10:38:13 am
Hi Luke,
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Miss LaRose
11/9/2018 11:24:29 am
I love reading your stories Luke! I really enjoyed the details you included in this passage, you have quite the imagination! Keep up the great work :)
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Mrs. Wilson
11/10/2018 11:58:07 am
Amazing job Luke!
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Mrs. Deol
11/23/2018 12:37:43 pm
Wow!! Amazing job, Luke! I can’t wait to read more :)
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