Elmer S Gish Running Club members wanted to race but they were exhausted after 10 laps. All the girls in the race did not have the laces tied up, were too tired, and didn't eat breakfast.
They forgot to tie up laces because the teacher was talking too much. The teacher was saying to not cheat and have some fun and try to do your best. They couldn't get enough sleep the night before because they were too excited about the race and they couldn't sleep because they lost track of time. So they almost fell asleep on the track. They didn't eat breakfast because they were in a hurry to get to the race. The bus left early because it is a long drive to get to the Butterdome and the race started at 1:00. All the girls were excited and exhausted, but fell asleep on the track!
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Mrs Wolff
12/6/2018 05:39:53 pm
What a awesome story Gary! I can’t wait to hear the other stories you come up with!
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Mrs. Ginther
12/6/2018 06:16:48 pm
Gary - you have such wonderful and fun ideas! Can't wait to see what the next topic will be!!
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Cath (Team100, Melbourne, Australia)
12/11/2018 12:49:36 am
This is an interesting story. I really like how you have used repetition and explained the reason why things happened. It is so true how one thing happening can lead to something else and then to somethings else. I think your story gives this message and tells the reader if you have a goal you really have to prepare for it. Well done.
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