It was Christmas morning and my brother Alexander got to open a long present.It was a ski scooter.He looked out the window, but there was not enough snow outside.He had to wait for the snow.It finally came 18 days later! We quickly got ready to go to the hill behind Sobey’s.At the top of the hill it was cold and cloudy. I was on my snowboard and Alexander was on his new ski scooter.I went backwards down the hill and quickly the sun came out.It was so bright the light blinded Alexander.He turned and went over a jump so fast and he did a flip and fell. He slid and went in to a big pile of snow. I pulled him out and half of his body was in ice. I laughed and we wanted to go again.
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Miss. Bischler
1/10/2019 11:47:20 am
I love the story! This story has made me want to go sledding!
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Miss Pucci
1/10/2019 08:50:29 pm
What a great story! I’m interested to see what a ski scooter looks like, I wonder if it would be hard to steer. Awesome job!
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Cath (Team100, Melbourne, Australia)
1/15/2019 07:07:32 pm
I really like how you keep changing the mood of this story. Firstly there was an exciting new scooter, then there wasn't any snow, next the day comes but the sun is shining in their eyes and the scooter goes out of control. You would then think this would be a disaster but instead Alexander is just pulled out and they want to go again. That last sentence just works so well and is so believable. Well done.
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